PHOTO PROMPT © Fleur Lind
Nedra thought the blinding light was the sun, setting under lowering clouds, turning their underbellies blood-red .
She lowered her visor, It seemed as if it were just–sitting on the road–in fact, it was moving toward her!
White-knuckling her steering wheel, Nedra looked for an escape from what she now recognized as headlights. She would have to turn within seconds to avoid a collision.
On her left, she saw a corn field. On her right was darkness.
She swerved hard left. Her car went airborne as the truck’s horn dopplered past. She landed hard, but upright. And she wept.
A narrow escape
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A relief in the end, thank goodness.
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So true, when driving alertness is everything
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There would have been liquid coming out of more than just my eyes had I been her!
Good drama in so few words.
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Thanks, Dawn. Yes, I think you’re right. A close call like that affects the whole body.
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You have a talent for action scenes, Linda. “White-knuckling the steering wheel” is an exceptional turn of phrase, neat and compact. What a thriller of a hundred!
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Dora, thank you. Your comments are always encouraging.
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“…the truck’s horn dopplered past.” A new word for me — must look it up. 🙂
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It may not actually be a word :). The Doppler Effect is a real term, though, describing a sound that diminishes as it goes away from you.
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Checked it out. Clever use of the word! And quite the mini-tale.
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The road is a dangerous place. What a fright.
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Yikes. When choosing between ditching in a cornfield or the dark unknown, the cornfield wind every time….
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Yes. And the human brain evaluates all that and makes a decision with lightening speed!
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Yep. I read the story as it was over in a flash, not the length of time needed to read.
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Now yesterday a scary accident… I think I’d cry too. A miracle.
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Woo! close call! Thrilling little story.
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Thanks, Mason.
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Wow, at least se survived 🙂
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Lucky girl!
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Yes–and smart, too 🙂
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Well done! And I totally get it on that last line. Strong finish, that! Whew!
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Thanks so much!
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🙂
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That was exciting and tense. Well written!
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I m glad that she made the life saving turn. A fraction of a second is all what it takes, doesn’t it?
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Yes–and she had good reflexes!
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Good building of tension. Happy she survived it.
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Dear Linda,
I’d be crying, too, after that wild ride. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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