Elise opened her eyes, groggy from her afternoon nap. At first she thought she was still asleep, dreaming, as she took in the ladder propped against her window, and the feet and legs she saw.
Her eyes traveled up the legs. The rest of the–man?–was concealed by the curtain. The feet weren’t moving. Neither up nor down. Could he see her? She flipped the afghan over her legs, made sure her robe was closed.
Eyes wide, she watched as one of the feet drew back, hesitated, and then swung hard into her window.
Scary. Hope she gets her cell phone ready to call the policemen
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I don’t know. She just woke up, was groggy. Her reactions were slow. Could be. . .
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Well written!!
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Thanks 🙂
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He may be in for a shock
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I hope so. Think she has a taser hidden under the afghan?
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A tense cliffhanger Linda, a nice change of pace!
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Thanks, Iain.
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Oooh!
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Let’s hope she snaps out of it quickly!
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Good grief! That would be worst nightmare come true. I hope she knows kick-boxing.
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I’m hoping she’s got some kind of a weapon secreted about her person. I think she may need it.
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If only I’d had a few more words–but then, it wouldn’t be a cliffhanger any more, would it?
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this is quite a departure from your usual. but well done. 🙂
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Thanks. Every now and then I do go to the darker side, and maybe I need to do it more–people are always so surprised 🙂
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Oh boy, that turned nasty fast!
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Good change of pace, Linda. I hope Elise can call the police before anything bad happens to her. BTW congratulations of 100,000 hits on your blog – quite an achievement!
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Thank you, Penny. I was pleased when I saw that. I don’t post here nearly as often as I do on my Bible Study blog, so it was good to see the stats 🙂
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I was not expecting that! She woke up in time to be poised with the pistol as he attempts to come into her dwelling. Suspenseful story!
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Thanks, Jade. The picture just seemed very sinister to me!
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You’re welcome, Linda.
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This is frightening and I have a hard time imagining he is coming in for a good reason. Great job!
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The only possible good reason, I think, would be that he was a fireman and he was there to rescue her. But that’s not where my mind was going 🙂
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Dear Linda,
What a place to leave us! Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Oh no, I hope she wakes up quickly and can react by grabbing the phone!! A cliffhanger for sure!
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Run! You led us into a peaceful ordinary scenario and scared us. A great little piece of a building thriller.
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Thanks, James 🙂
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I’ve a feeling this didn’t end up the way he intended!
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I hope not!
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Ooo. I hope it’s sleep paralysis. Nasty in itself but at least she’ll wake up safe.
Fantastic story Linda.
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Thanks 🙂
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Oh my, I do hope it was an accident and not a dangerous man.
You left us intrigued, Linda. Nicely done.
Be safe … Be Healthy … Be Happy 😍
Isadora 😎
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Thanks for reading and commenting 🙂
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Oh my God ! But why? I am now worried about Elise.
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I know–but I ran out of words 🙂
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I think she’s going to need more than an afghan. Nice cliffhanger…. or ladder hanger.
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Oh no, this is scary!
I hope she is okay…
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