PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot
Annie’s gaze kept coming back to the flower high above the rest of the planter, stretching to find one last ray of the sun before it slid under the bridge.
Would the sun get wet when it dropped into the ocean? Is it so hot that even the ocean can’t smother the flame? And why is that flower reaching so hard to catch the warmth? It was never cold here.
But then Annie saw the whole picture, the rest of Mommy’s plants shrouded in darkness, and she understood.
She hated going to bed. There were bad things in the dark.
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(PS: Word Press has taken out the little icon that showed the word count. I’ve discovered, though, that if you click on “Block” in the right panel and then highlight your story, it will show the word count. Maybe you’ve all discovered this. I’m a little slow with the tech stuff 🙂 )
Loved the image of the plant reaching for a bit more of the sunlight, a nice metaphor.
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Thanks, Iain. I’ve always been fascinated by the way plants tend to follow the sun 🙂
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And so beliefs are born
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Indeed. It too me YEARS to get over my fear of the dark!
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Lovely stuff, atmospheric to the max! Good tip about the word count too, Ive been counting my FF stories for years!
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Thanks so much. And I’m glad to have found a new way to know my word count!
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Dear Linda,
Ah the mind of a child, so well captured in your story. As for the word count note I never knew that. I write my stories in Word which gives me the word count. Then I copy and paste my story to WP.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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It was a neat little icon, but WP removed it. I hate it when they do that! But anyway, I still don’t have to count words myself.
Thanks for your comment.
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The plant and the child sharing a fear is a brilliant concept. Well done! And I copy/paste from word as well.
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Only a child would wonder about the sun dropping into the ocean!
I’m a Google Docs copy/paste kinda guy myself!
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I never even thought about writing my stuff elsewhere and then pasting it to WordPress. Good idea 🙂
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Ah yes the mind of a child – so many fears of the dark 🙂
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I had a vivid imagination as a child. The things I imagined still live in my memory!
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Linda, I was one of those with a deathly fear of the dark. It lasted until I went off to college and then it disappeared. Wonderful story-telling through the POV of the child!
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Thank you, Dora 🙂
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What a lovely way to show the way a child thinks.
I’m lucky, I still use the classic and it still has my word count.
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Annie sounds like an observant child. Maybe that will be what saves her.
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Yes. I like that 🙂
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A lovely story, so well capturing the mind of a child. I was convinced that my wardrobe was an elevator and monsters came up in it when I was 7!
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Had you been reading The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe? 🙂
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