
Walking into the shop was like entering a magic room. I’d never seen such a wonderful collection of indescribable trinkets, jewelry, novelties.
“Where does it all come from?” I asked the proprietor.
“Here ‘n’ there.”
“It is all so lovely. All handmade?”
“Yup.”
“Those halloween skulls are intriguing. . . “
Silence.
“Are they sold individually, or together?”
“All ‘er none.”
“You don’t talk much.”
Silence.
“Will you bargain with me?”
“Nope.”
“How do you ever sell anything?”
Silence.
Irritated, I decided to leave. The door was locked. I glanced back at him. Cold-eyed, he said, “No sale, no exit. Your choice.”
Shoulda paid attention to the sign on the door.
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Exactly!
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Quick, buy something and get out of there before he changes his mind. Good one, Linda.
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Thanks 🙂
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Buy something, quick, or you’ll be another skull!
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Ha! I wonder how big his collection was. . .
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Oh man! Quickaly!!! Buy something and hightail it outta there!!
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Yup. Anything at all!
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Strong selling technique! I guess small businesses have to come up with new strategies in the current world we live in. Good story.
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🙂
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Yikes! Talk about trap! No salesmanship needed here. Wonder what the price of freedom will be.
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Too much, I’m thinking.
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Ha! Yeah, the strong-arming kind 🙂
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Oh dear.
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Brrrr! Prolonged cold shudder. I didn’t know you had horror in your repertoire, Linda! Well done.
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It’s popped up a time or two, but it’s not my normal genre. Thanks, Penny. Good to know someone enjoys my infrequent trips to the dark side 🙂
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Certain stores, beyond certain borderlines, are best restricted merely to window shopping
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Yes, I think you’re right. If only she’d never gone inside!
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Alas those other dimensions never have recognizable borderlines
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Just another skull on the wall. Clever take Linda.
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Thanks 🙂
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Dear Linda,
That’s one sinister little shop of horrors. Well done, but eeeeeeek!
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks. Have to admit I kind of creeped myself out with this one 🙂
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most definitely, not for window shopping. she better buy something or else. 🙂
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Good grief Linda! Didn’t see that coming. I better be careful in trinket stores in the future. That was fabulous writing!!!
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Well planned, Linda. Were the skulls those of past customers who refused to buy? Yikes!
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we’ll never know—one of the perks of having only 100 words 🙂
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Well, thats one way to run a business. I wonder how many people have vanished because they didn’t want to buy anything. Great stuff
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Thanks 🙂
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Creepy! What to do – push the point or buy something and exit quickly? 🙂
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I’d get out of there! Buy a trinket and vamoose!
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Great little story, I wonder if his sales technique will gain a reputation and be bad for business. I loved the tension you created in your writing , nicely done.
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Thanks, James.
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Customers need to use their head before shopping here, otherwise the shopkeeper will. Nice work with the horror genre.
I think your blog address must have changed in the last few months or so as I had the url https://lindaswriting.wordpress.com/ saved. No wonder I’ve not been able to comment.
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It’s always been http://www.lindaswritingblog.wordpress.com—so glad you’ve figured it out 🙂
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This is one grim shop. Perhaps the worst that I have come across. You did well
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Thank you!
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Oh no, very creepy. Nicely done!
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Reminded me of the Hotel California: spooky!
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Thanks, Rob.
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LOL. I did not see that ending coming. Loved it.
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I always love a surprise ending 🙂 Thanks so much.
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Now, that’s a business plan! I bet he had no problem getting a loan. “Every customer will buy something.” “How can you be so sure?” “I have my ways.”
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Exactly. Can’t lose 🙂
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I say buy the skulls and never look back!
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Hope she brought enough money!
Many years ago, I joined an organized tour in China, and the tour guide made us stay in a tea shop until we had bought enough. Obviously, he got commission…
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I think the words for that is “extortion”!
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Exactly!
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Oh… I think buy whatever just to get out… Maybe a skull of a previous “customer”
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That’s one way to drive up sales. Great story.
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Thanks.
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Well, at least she knows how he’s able to sell anything. Clever story, Linda 🙂
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Oooooooo creepy! No way our me thinks. Those skulls are a clue. Eeep
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Yup!
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