
Haruki stayed hidden in his cave on the island for many long days. He lost track after a while, and when he knew he would die if he didn’t find food, he began to venture out every few days.
The quietness bothered him. For endless months there had been bombs, screaming, bleeding, and rifle fire. Now, the silence was eerie.
One day, he dared to climb a tree that leaned far out over the water. He watched for hours. Nothing. No Japanese, no Americans.
Back in his cave, sleep eluded him.
Was the war over?
Note: The last known Japanese soldier to be found was Hiroo Onoda. He walked out of hiding in 1974, nearly 30 years after the war ended; he died in 2014 at age 91. He stayed hidden rather than to risk the total loss of face in being captured by the enemy.
Note #2: I chose to see him as peering through small binoculars rather than using a cell phone. A cell just wouldn’t have worked in my story 🙂
Great piece of history, Linda. Imagine travelling forward 30 years in time as he did
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I’m sure it was a shock to him. But he lived a very long time 🙂
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Nicely told. I enjoyed reading the story.
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Thanks so much.
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Good piece of historical fiction, Linda. You gave us a little glimpse into the man’s life and motivation.
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Thanks, Penny. I remember reading about when that soldier came out of hiding.
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Me too.
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Great snippet of history, really interesting – and a good starting point for a longer piece.
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Yes. I’d love to know how his life turned out.
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I like your using an historical event as part of your story. I’m glad he was able to enjoy 40 more years after leaving the cave.
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Yes. I hope he married and had grandchildren and lived happily ever after 🙂
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🙂
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From the first sentence, I thought of that situation of the Japanese soldier holding out way after the war was over, so I was gratified to see I was right. Nice job with it.
-David
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Thanks, David. I’m fascinated by that story.
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Dear Linda,
There’s no need for anyone to be a slave to the photo prompt. You were close enough and the story is wonderful. No need to explain the absence of the cell phone. 😉 The last line is the exclamation point on the rest.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I didn’t even notice the cell phone LOL! So no cell phone in mine.
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Well, now I’m looking forward to reading yours. I need to catch up. We lost electricity yesterday until around midnight–huge rain and windstorm, with a big serving of hail to top it off.
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I may have changed things if I had seen it.
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I’m glad you didn’t. It was fine just the way it is.
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Thanks, Rochelle. I don’t know why, really, I felt I had to explain. Maybe because so many others went to the phone 🙂
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that shows a distinctive side of the problems with war
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Yes. There is nothing at all glorious about war.
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Wonderfully woven historical tale, Linda. I’m with Rochelle. No need to explain the lack of cell phone. He could be scratching his ear, if you so chose!!
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You are right. Or maybe cleaning his ear, who knows? 🙂
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haha!
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Great piece Linda
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Thanks so much.
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This is a great story. You only touched the surface (100 word limit will do that). Wow 30 years…
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I know. I wonder how he kept his sanity.
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A terrific story. What a way to spend the greater part of your life. Much to ponder here.
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Indeed. The story has held my interest since 1974 when Hiroo walked out of his hiding place.
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Poor chap. At least he had plenty of life left in him when he came out.
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Yes. A ripe old age 🙂
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I can’t imagine hiding for thirty years. It’s amazing he survived and went on to live forty more years. His re-entry back to his country and culture must have been shocking. Great writing, Linda!
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I’m sure it was, since America had long been an ally of Japan by then. He must have wondered what the war was all about!
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What a great piece of historical fiction. I can understand the hiding, but the reason, oh dear… What a great story.
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In that time, it was more honorable for a Japanese soldier to die by his own hand than to be taken captive.
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A nice view of history – thanks for sharing.
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Haruki seemed to be sleeping better when war was raging. Now that war seems to have ended, sleep has also eluded Haruki. He should get back to mainland.
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I guess we’d have to have been there 🙂
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A great pice of faction! Excellent Linda
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Faction. I like that 🙂
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A good story based on real history, Linda. I remember seeing that on TV when it happened. Changing the cell phone to binoculars was just fine. Writers often take a bit of license with stories. As I remember, he was popular with the other Japanese and even got married. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks, Suzanne. Hadn’t thought of him in years until this weeks photo prompt 🙂
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Surviving 30 years in solitude. This is story of HOPE. I liked the way you took a writer’s liberty to change from cell-phone to binoculars.
https://ideasolsi65.blogspot.com/2019/05/the-cellphone.html
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Thank you 🙂
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Yes, I know the story, Linda. What a clever idea. Very well written, too.
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Nicely told. I am sure there are many people who would like to hide away from the troubled world.
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Sometimes, I’m one of those 🙂
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I’d heard these tales but wasn’t sure if they were true. Interesting!
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Mine is fiction, but at least one of them, the one I mentioned in my notes, is absolutely true. Who knows? Could be others.
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I remember hearing about that Japanese soldier. Sort of like Rip VanWinkle in some ways. I bet he was astounded by all the new gadgets and gizmos.
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Yes, I think so too. Personal computers and cell phones were still not ubiquitous, as they are today, but there was a world of difference from 1945 to 1974.
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Hard to imagine how someone could stay in hiding all that time and not be found, as well as how he could survive and stay sane. Great story, Linda. You’ve shown how it might have been for him.
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Thank you, Margaret.
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Good story.
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That’s such a great story. How would it be to get back into life, among people, into a new culture?
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Especially one in which your hated enemy had become your ally.
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Me too binoculars. Good story.
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Thanks, Patrick.
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