His life, from birth, was planned for him. Born to wealth and power, his education the best, he grew up believing he was invincible.
As a young man, newly married to the state’s most beautiful and elegant young lady, he was already held in high regard by everyone. His stature was indisputable. His wealth, inherited and earned, was legendary. Money paved every path.
His wife closed her eyes to his “indiscretions.” She dutifully produced an heir, and dutifully died thereafter.
Now, he has a huge gravestone and a herd of goats to keep him company.
Better munching in the grass of a graveyard than in paths made of money
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That almost sounds biblical –from the book of Proverbs 🙂
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And, I don’t like him much!
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Me neither 🙂
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Well, all I can say is, perhaps the cycle of … um … life … (and what pushes the daisies and grass up for the goats to feed) will let him finally redeem himself, in some measure. …
Well done!
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Thanks. Maybe, but I think it’s too late.
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For some it may well be …
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He thought he was invincible, walked through life on a red carpet, but we all end up in a graveyard someplace. At least he had goats to keep him company. Well-written as always.
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Thank you, Brenda.
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In the end even the largest slab of marble is nothing but a dead stone…
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Exactly. A few short years of glory in this life, and you can’t take it with you.
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Sounds as if he had no friends. I guess a herd of goats will have to do and perhaps that’s all he deserves! Happy New Year.
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I think you’re right, on both counts. No friends, and the goats are all he deserves.
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The 4:am program which is on agriculture turned out more boring his week than ever which made me switched the station because of the nonsense the folks were talking about a man died last year. These folks spoke of the nice things he did. when he was alived but didn’t tell him a word when he could hear them.
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Interesting comment, Elbert. In my story, the guy really didn’t deserve to hear nice things. His whole life was lived for his own pleasure, and no one else mattered.
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Dear Linda,
Sounds like a lackluster life all told. Wonder how his heir feels about him. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Hie heir, now an orphan, could have a novel all to himself 🙂
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But if you look at it in another way, he had fun while he was alive. Why should he care what happens after he’s gone?
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He did have an heir for whom he should have been responsible. And men of his wealth usually had people working for them, depending on them for their own sustenance. I don’t think he cared much about anything but himself.
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A story with a great lesson. Beautifully written, as always.
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Thanks, Moon.
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The Reaper comes for us all, big or small, rich or poor, it makes no nevermind.
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Truth.
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With all money and position of privilege and all open doors, still could not stop door to death opening. Wheel of time moves slowly but surely. At least he has big tombstone and a herd of goat at death.
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Death has no prejudice.
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In the end he’s just another gravestone in a cemetery, just like everyone else.
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Exactly.
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How the mighty fall! Great story
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Thanks, Lynn 🙂
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My pleasure
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We all amount to the same thing in the end. Death has no class system. Well done.
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Thanks, Sandra. A lesson many of us learn too late.
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like they say, death is the great equalizer.
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Indeed 🙂
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Raised with money and no morals… needless to say, we all end up in the same place…
Well done.
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Thanks, Dale.
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QUITE A COMEDOWN
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Loved the story, Linda. I had to read the 3rd paragraph a couple of times. Did you mean to say that after she produced an hier HE died dutifully? I had some trouble linking who had died.
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Sorry for the confusion. Grammatically, “She” is the subject of the sentence; the verb is compound. “She produced. . .and died.” I went back to make sure my grammar was correct, and it is–but if it was confusing, then I should have found a more definitive way to say it. Thanks, Russell.
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I’m guessing the goats like being around him more than anyone in life did..
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Sure, Violet. He and his dead cohorts help fertilize the grass 🙂
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Very nice, reminded me of the Tolstoy story ‘How Much Land Does A Man Need’ http://www.online-literature.com/tolstoy/2738/
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Oh, that’s a great story! And that my little effort reminded you of something Tolstoy wrote? Well, I’ll be smiling all day over that one 🙂
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Spoilt all along, I guess he didn’t realise what hit him when his wife died – even all the power and wealth couldn’t have stopped that from happening. Good story, Linda!
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Thank you.
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I liked the message here. A lovely write.
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Thanks 🙂
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Never herd of the old goat, or
the old goat was never heard from again.
Randy
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🙂
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Poetic justice.
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Indeed.
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The protagonist wasn’t just a spoiled child; he was spoiled all his life! How sad that his wife “dutifully produced an heir” and “dutifully died thereafter.”
A beautifully crafted tale.
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Thank you Magarisa.
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Unfortunately the entitled wild~and~crazy~guy syndrome is so common in anyone who has it all. It should be kept on the very shortest of leashes
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Agreed!
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That’s it we all will end with maybe not even goats and a stone.loved the write up
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Thansk:)
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Goats are so cute!
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No, I haven’t—but I will 🙂
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