PHOTO PROMPT © Dawn M. Miller
Janie slumped in her corner of the back seat, hypnotized by monotony. It was hot. No AC in 1953. The scarf around her head kept the wind from blowing her hair to kingdom come.
Drowsy, she jerked awake when Dad said, “Here comes the tunnel! It’s going to seem like you’re right in the water when we get through to the other side!”
And it did. The rushing Colorado River cooled the air, and clung to the wet rock as far as Janie could see. Janie’s excitement returned. They would be in Grand Junction today!
Note: After I wrote this, I looked up the photo on Google and found that’s it’s probably a bridge into Harper’s Ferry–definitely not Colorado. But the moment I saw the picture, Colorado and our trips back there to see my dad’s parents came clearly to mind. The long, hot monotony of Kansas and Nebraska, yielding grudgingly to the blue line of the Rockies on the horizon; the suddenness of being on what seemed like a very narrow road that clung to the rock that was washed by the wide, rushing water, was such a change! I used to imagine what it had been like for the first pioneers trying to figure out a way to get across that river. I’m sure there was a portage somewhere much farther north or south, but at least for a while I could entertain myself with pictures in my mind of what it was like to travel that country for the very first time, with horses or oxen pulling the prairie schooners to their new home.
Dear Linda,
It never matters where the photo is taken, it’s what you, as the writer sees. 😉 Loved this piece. I could feel her anticipations. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I think of that principle nearly every week–not what you look at, but what you see. You’d be surprised how often that applies in my counseling office!
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I love where this photo prompt took you. Well done.
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Great story. I love Grand Junction, too.
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I was born there. Mount Garfield, the Grand Mesa, my uncle’s peach orchard’s in Palisade, so many other places. Love it there.
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So cool. I grew up in Denver. My sisters now live right next door to each other in Eckert. Although I love Colorado, I wouldn’t leave the PNW unless I absolutely had to.
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I have an aunt who’s lived in Denver for 50 years or more. Small world, huh?
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Wonderfully descriptive!
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Thanks. Keith.
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This sounds like an amazing train journey – as a fan of train travel, one I would love to do 🙂
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I don’t even know if that’s still a possibility, since they built the Dwight Eisenhower Highway over the pass from Denver to the Western Slope. A very smooth ride compared to the one I remember as a girl.
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Ha! My high school friends and I drove through that tunnel the day it opened. We thought it looked like a giant bathroom with all the white tile. Kids!
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I loved “no AC in 1953”
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My dad used to joke about 4WD air conditioning–four windows down. Couldn’t fit it into the post, though–used up too many words 🙂
Thanks, Neil.
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Love the descriptions.
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Thanks, Lisa.
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I enjoyed the scene you created, of a journey with her family. Well described. I like your wording, “hypnotized by monotony.” I remember long car trips with my four siblings in a station wagon, hypnotized by monotony. =)
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Oh boy. It was an exciting moment when we were stopped by the endless freight trains rolled across the prairies. We counted cars until the caboose finally appeared. Good memories.
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I always loved Colorado. I visited as a kid a couple of times, as a college student a couple of times and as an adult, well, so far a couple of times, but hopefully more coming up! I liked your story. it doesn’t matter where the photo is from, it’s where your mind goes that matters 🙂
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Thanks, Trent 🙂
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Great description of an exciting moment. And I do enjoy your “banners”. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas yourself and I look forward to lots more hellos to the months next year 🙂
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Thank you, Jilly. I’m always glad to hear that someone likes my monthly changes 🙂
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The monotony of a long train ride is well described, and having ridden on trains with AC I had forgotten the heat…. I do love trains today.
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A whole different thing. Think of having to ride on the old wooden ones that rattled across this country–coal smoke, cigar smoke, sweat, humanity- –and no air returns 🙂
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My experience is much later… but travelling through Europe on crowded trains during the heat of summer…
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🙂
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What a wonderful take on the prompt, the excitement of the train never fades.
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Don’t worry, I couldn’t tell whether it was in Colorado or wherever it was 😉
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I imagine it must have been quite a thrill for travelers back then to see whole new landscapes fly by them – AC or no AC!
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Yes–so different from the rolling greenness of the east–and in those days, I don’t think the scenery flew by! Plodding along on foot or in a wagon, I’m sure there were days they felt they’d gained very little progress.
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I really love the excitement in her voice, and completely understand it. Even imagining the view makes my heart jump a little.
I also truly enjoyed your descriptive note. There is so much joy in the memory…
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Yes there is, Magaly. Thank you.
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The excitement of the kid was infectious 🙂
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Nice story. I can relate the excitement of entering tunnel, crossing a bridge on a raging river and reaching a big junction station.
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Exciting indeed! Thank you 🙂
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Charming tale, loved it
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Thanks 🙂
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Brought back lots of long ride vacation memories, pre-AC. Fortunately we werent in Florida yet! I could feel the cool breeze on the other side!
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Sounds like quite a welcome relief! Your story brought back the excitement I always felt when going on a long journey as a kid.
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Wonderful story, Linda!
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Thanks, Dale 🙂
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once she grows up, it must be one of those moments frozen in time. 🙂
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Yes. Exactly.
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I remember being the “lump in the back seat” when our family did road trips. Kansas…. the flats of Colorado …. Well captured.
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I think there a tree in Nebraska or Kansas. Not sure 🙂
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I feel privileged to have tagged along on your family vacation.. Thanks for taking me.
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What a lovely comment. Thank you 🙂
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Loved reading about time spent in Colorado, great memories
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Thanks. Amazing state.
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I love both of your stories and connect with the thin line in the distance that ultimately becomes the great Rocky Mountains. You took me right there again. Nicely done.
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So glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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I could feel the excitement in this, lovely.
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All about where you were taken when you saw the photo! I love that it took you back!
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Thanks, Russell. I always try to go with my first response, and it usually is the right one for me.
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You generated a great feel of heat and anticipation. Well done.
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Thanks, Irene.
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For a minute I visualized a train in a fun park where there might be a glass tunnel with water above your head.
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Maybe today, but not in 1953 🙂 Sounds like a really cool idea, though!
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What a delightful slice of life! You captured the relief from monotony very vividly.
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Thanks, Penny. It’s just how I remember it 🙂
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Wonderfully descriptive. Love the phrase “hypnotized by monotony”.
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Thank you 🙂
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My pleasure.
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In these days where all the long distance travel is by air, this brings back memories of good old train journeys. Nice one.
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Thanks 🙂
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Wonderful story. I love how all of a sudden it became an adventure again.
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I just imagine sitting beside Janie and feeling the cool air after exiting the tunnel. Great job, Linda.
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Thanks, Russell 🙂
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I really enjoyed the FF Linda, but I loved the passage you wrote afterwards, so evocative and heartfelt, a great read. 🙂
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Thank you. I don’t usually add a postscript to my FF stories, but it just felt right this time 🙂
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I’m glad you didn’t know where the photo was from. Lovely interpretation.
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Thanks, Dawn. It’s what you see, right?
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Something about tunnels are so fascinating for kids. Unfortunately my kid doesn’t like closed spaces like I did at her age. Your story took me back to our own travels.
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