Helpless, the old man stood under the sheltering trees with his young grandson. They watched as the forerunners of the killing clouds formed over their heads, knowing there was no escape.
Hundreds of miles away, the volcano belched, roared, and vomited its noxious mix of fire, stone, and ash. The death cloud.
“Don’t worry,” the scientists had said. “It’s been extinct for thousands of years. The noises you hear are just internal rock slides. Sleep well. There is no danger.”
The old man saw the ugly clouds, and he knew. Danger. Death.
They weren’t worried about nuclear warfare any more.
As usual, accurate forecasts from the weathermen.
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Well done.
Of course your story raises the question: If a volcano erupted hundreds of miles away, would there really be no hope of escape — assuming some means of transportation? (Though right now that river doesn’t look very promising. 🙂
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Every volcano affects the weather around the world to some degree. Mt. St. Helens was a very good example of that, as the winds carried as for thousands of miles. This one is of gigantic proportions, different from any other that we know of—and, it is fiction 🙂
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The killing clouds and death clouds – great phrases. Good take.
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Thanks, Lain.
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Now, that, is terrifying. great story.
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Thanks, Jelli 🙂
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Well, there is that super-volcano under Yellowstone National Park (not all that far from where I live), but it hasn’t blown its top in 640,000 years.
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Anything can happen. . . . it’s fiction, after all 🙂
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Boom! Oops.
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Dear Linda,
Frightening story. We don’t do ourselves in Nature just might. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I haven’t had time to start reading the others’ stories, but I’m looking forward to it. Such a brooding picture.
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I think if I had to choose between an act of nature and an act of man . . . I’d choose nature every time. Kudos.
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Me too.
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Great story and having lived on an island with an erupting volcano you described that noxious mix well.
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Thanks, Irene. I have a very clear memory of the eruption of Mt. St. Helens. Imagine it being 1000x worse!
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Frightening and Deadly.
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Well that brightened my day. Not.
Good piece, good message.
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Thanks for reading and commenting 🙂
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Trust the scientists. To get it wrong.
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Ha! Sadly, true more often than we realize.
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At least it has taken their minds off nuclear warfare!
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Clare, I really believe that if God ever decides to unleash all the power inside the earth and contained in the heavens, it would be far beyond our imagination. Nuclear power would seem insignificant.
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I too loved the phrases killing clouds and death clouds. Nicely written piece.
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thanks so much 🙂
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Nature’s way to prove its might. Great take.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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REALITY of life. Atleast they will escape the Holocaust!👌
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Who can challenge the nature when it emits water and fire and all that is hidden within itself.
Nicely written Linda. 🙂
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Thanks for reading and commenting 🙂
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chilling granonine… well done
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Thanks 🙂
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Seems like bad forecasts and nuclear weapons. Humans have had a hand in both. Lovely use of imagery too 🙂
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Thanks, Fatima 🙂
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oh, oh. The age old battle of gut feel he knows Vs pathetic scientific forecasts. Great write!
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Thanks, Lavanya 🙂
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Rather bleak. Impending doom doesn’t give us much hope, does it?
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Nope. Seems there was a good deal of bleak in this week’s responses.
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Nature takes over. You’ve crafted a very ominous atmosphere.
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It seemed an ominous picture to me. As well as many others, it would seem.
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Good story, Linda. You achieve an ebb and flow in tension – quite a feat in 100 words! – and build to a satisfying conclusion.
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You should!
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Scary to think that nature can be even more destructive than us. Great story!
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Well written. Yes, if nature herself goes on the attack the effect of our weapons pales into insignificance
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A cautionary tale, Linda, with a Biblical tone. There are no hints as to why, just a feeling of resignation, that we got it wrong, that we were always going to get it wrong. Despite being told.
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You got the gold star this week 🙂 Exactly the tone I was trying to create.
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I suspect “duck and cover” isn’t going to work on volcanoes any better than it would have worked on nucs.
In the last few years I’ve been to both Indonesia and Iceland, both with active volcanoes. The world really is a frightening place.
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I still remember learning about “The Ring of Fire,” an area encircled by active volcanoes–and millions of people living in harm’s way. Shivery stuff.
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Yes, if nature herself goes on the onslaught the consequence of our weapons pales into insignificance Seems there was a safe deal of desolate in this workweek’s responses.
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It was that kind of photo, I guess.
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This just goes to show that scientists don’t always know best. A well written tale.
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I could not get my students to worry much about a possible eruption at Yellowstone, someday.
They just kept saying we were in Indiana and would still be alive. Then I reminded them that most of their xboxes and new games were made in Silicon Valley in Calif. They were speechless!
Scott
Mine: https://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2017/10/31/reckoning-friday-fictioneers/
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Good one! Made them think 🙂
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Love to make people think!
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