PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
Aggie sighed as she turned away from Ed’s casket. This had not been the plan. She was supposed to go first. He was stronger, had better health. They didn’t know about the clogged arteries until it was too late.
It had been cloudy all day, and rainy. Fitting, Aggie thought, for the day she buried her love.
She glanced up as light broke through the dark clouds, and realized the sky was clearing. The sun was winning, shooting its rays from behind the dark clouds that were breaking up.
“I’ll be okay, Ed. Don’t worry. Goodbye.”
Just Writing! 
I like that you leave the reader with an optimistic note.
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Incredibly sweet and loving. Nice piece.
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A loving send off. Nicely done.
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Aw, such a lovely, gentle story!
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What a sweet story.
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This is so sweet. Love the sun was winning line.
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Such brokenheartedness.
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Seems like she realises there are plenty more fish in the sea.
Go, Aggie!
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If only the sun could always shine on those who are bereaved. This was a lovely use of the prompt
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Thanks, Michael.
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Very sweet, I liked it.
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The things we do for those we love–reach from across the grave to cheer them… lift our chin, wipe our tears, and live for them. This is beautiful.
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Love endures and it comforts, even when the one we love has gone on.
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exactly. Thanks for commenting
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Aww, such a lovely piece.
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Thanks, Jade.
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A very beautiful and heartfelt story! Sometimes things happen at very sad moments that gives us some renewed strength that we need.
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Good for her, she need a new start
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Lovely, poignant story, Linda.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle.
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Quite moving, Linda. There’s always hope at the end. Great! And thanks for this.
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Thanks for your encouraging comment 🙂
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I found his reaching back to his wife very touching as was her reassurance. I took wrote about death. Funny how such a “sunny” picture made us think of this.
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It was the contrast that took me there. Wonderful photo.
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Very touching story and very well written.
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Oh, dear, what a touching story. 🙂 ❤
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Good for her that she doesn’t give up on life. Very touching story.
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Well portrayed hope amidst all the gloom and disappointment
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Thanks for a great story with a loving end.
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Glad you enjoyed it
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Awww…that’s so sweet.
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Love her bouncing back, taking encouragement from the sky!
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This is so touching! I loved it… I hope she lives well till her end. Ma’m, I would be very happy if you could give me your feedback on my attempt. You can find it here:
https://yuhublogger.wordpress.com/2017/03/05/the-shape-shifters/
Thanks!
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